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Life gives you the impression that the more money you have the happier your life will be. Who doesn't want to be happy? Women want to make financial status to gain their independence from men, while men want financial gain to get the women of their dreams. Kids want social status that comes with being up on the hottest trends and fashion...thus, the more money you have, the cooler you can be. Is money the root of all evil? Or the means of attaining your wildest dreams and goals? Each person must decide for themselves, and be prepared to make sacrifices either way.